Hi Ella and Charlotte,I loved reading your writing. You have both chosen vocabulary that makes your work interesting to read. I like the way you have used personification to build the characters of your bikes. Keep up the good work! Miss Williamshttp://hopwoodclass11.primaryblogger.co.uk/
The writing is so cool great descriptions from a bikes point of view.How was the bike bike ride?
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