Tuesday, 22 October 2013

Otago Rail Trail Writing from the perspective of the poor bikes!

Ella's bike tells its story.......


Lottie's bike tells its story......


2 comments:

  1. Hi Ella and Charlotte,
    I loved reading your writing. You have both chosen vocabulary that makes your work interesting to read. I like the way you have used personification to build the characters of your bikes. Keep up the good work!
    Miss Williams
    http://hopwoodclass11.primaryblogger.co.uk/

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  2. The writing is so cool great descriptions from a bikes point of view.
    How was the bike bike ride?

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